I LOVED the story. Your writing and technique is amazing, your detail paints a perfect picture, and if I had taken a breath, I would've felt that pain in my chest that he did. You wrote it in a way that I could've been sitting up on a windowsill and looking down at all this happening. You're GREAT at it. So well done. :)
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I always go for high detail. I’ve always like authors who make me see and feel their world, so its what i go for too.
Looks like I’ll be posting the next bit once i finish it!